First draft shooting script and feedback
(1)The main character(Imogen) and side character(Jasper)are sitting on a bench.
(2)The characters walking away.
(2)The characters walking away.
(3)Peter watching Imogen and Jasper from behind a tree.
(4)Shots of the shrine and images of Peter and Imogen
(5)A zoom in on a picture of Imogen and Peter.
(6)Shots of the image, Imogen and Peter laughing fades into Imogen and Jasper laughing.
(7)Imogen smiling and laughing.
(8)Imogen and Jasper take a selfie.
(9)They take the picture and it fades to the kidnap scene.
(10)Extreme close up shot of Imogens eye which zooms out.
(11)Imogens face is dirty and she is looking around
(12)Pan down her cloths(ripped cloths as if their has been a struggle)shrine is in the shot(mid-shot)person pining up selfie shot.
(13)The pan continues down to her feet and pans back up to her face.
(14)The door creaks open with a close up of Imogens reaction.
(4)Shots of the shrine and images of Peter and Imogen
(5)A zoom in on a picture of Imogen and Peter.
(6)Shots of the image, Imogen and Peter laughing fades into Imogen and Jasper laughing.
(7)Imogen smiling and laughing.
(8)Imogen and Jasper take a selfie.
(9)They take the picture and it fades to the kidnap scene.
(10)Extreme close up shot of Imogens eye which zooms out.
(11)Imogens face is dirty and she is looking around
(12)Pan down her cloths(ripped cloths as if their has been a struggle)shrine is in the shot(mid-shot)person pining up selfie shot.
(13)The pan continues down to her feet and pans back up to her face.
(14)The door creaks open with a close up of Imogens reaction.
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